Feedback from a judge in the 23rd Annual Writer’s Digest Self-Published Book Awards was as lovely as a five-star review wrapped in a hug.

“Laura Lanni’s OR NOT TO BE has a fresh start. She jumps right into the intimacy of the Wixim family at the breakfast table and I completely connect with the main character, Anna. I was extremely impressed by the writing and the voice of Anna. There is nothing more important to me than to have sympathy for the main character and the author does this successfully.

Digging more into the novel, I am intrigued and interested when she dies. This really felt like a cross between women’s fiction and supernatural/time travel. It actually reminded me of PREMONITION, starring Sandra Bullock—which is a good thing! The connection between Anna and Eddie was strong and I was rooting for them to get together and when we find out that Eddie knows and understands how it works with Anna, I felt as though the tables turned on her! Now what?

This novel is well done and the character development is strong. The more you read the more information/history you get about Anna & Eddie. I empathized with both—yet felt frustrated at times for both. An intelligent novel—yet unusual. Overall, some of the strongest writing I’ve seen yet.”

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6 thoughts on “Writing Contest: Feedback is my PRIZE

  1. just found this in my inbox. how fantastical for you!!! i’d have that in skywriting across the whole country!!! congratulations on this huge conviction of being a wonderfully, talented writer. love this and You!

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